Letters to Poets

Reading, Craft and Structure:
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.RL.7.4, 8.4,9-10.4

Writing, Production and Distribution of Writing:
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.W.7.4 and 7.5,8.4 and 8.5, 9-10.4 and9-10.5

Speaking and Listening, Comprehension and Collaboration:
CCSS.ELA-Literacy.SL.7.1,8.1,9-10.1

Miracles by Walt Whitman
It’s all I have to bring today (26) by Emily Dickinson
Dream Variations by Langston Hughes
Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost
The Book of Questions, III by Pablo Neruda, translated by William O’Daly
The Red Wheelbarrow by William Carlos Williams
The Bean Eaters by Gwendolyn Brooks

Objectives

Students will:

• Identify poets whose poetic voices speak to them
• Select one of these poets and his or her poem to consider more deeply
• Provide verbal explanation or evidence about why they have chosen this poem and poet to their peers

Pre-Activities

Whole class warm-up: The Idea of Voice

• In their journals (or on a sheet of paper) ask your students to write some quick associations they have with the word “voice.”
• Ask students to turn and talk to a neighbor about their associations.
• Then ask them, sitting alone in their seats, to make a sound, using their own voice, without words, to express how they are feeling at the moment.
• Have them turn to their neighbors and repeat the noises/sounds they just practiced. While listening, their neighbor should describe the sound in writing in their journals and then tell the “voicer” what they heard. Make sure the students start first with the characteristics of the sounds, and then go into their interpretations of what they think the sounds meant, based on what they heard.
• Repeat the process with the second person being the “voicer” and the first one being the “listener.”
• Conduct a whole group discussion about what a person’s voice can tell us without words and how it tells us this.
• Write the characteristics on the board in the front of the room for all to see.
• Now ask for volunteers from the whole group to be “voicers,” this time using words as well as the characteristics noted earlier to express how they are feeling.
• Ask other students to describe what they hear this time. How is it different from what they heard without words?
• Write these comments on the board at the front of the room.

Individual and Small Group Reading: The Poet's Voice

• Divide your class into heterogeneous groups of three.
• Hand out the packet of seven poems to each student (or send your students to Poets.org to view the poems).
• Ask them to refer back to the list of characteristics of voice that is on the board to refresh their memories before they read the poems.
• As the students read the poems, have them complete a T-chart for each one, one side with what “jumps out at them” in the poem, the other side, why they think this is important to the poet’s voice/poem and if/how it is important to them, as a reader.
• If they are having difficulties, they can quietly ask the advice of someone in their group.
• After the students have completed T-charts, ask them to look over the poems and pick the poet’s voice to which they most relate or personally respond.

Explaining your Choice

• When your students have completed their reading and T-charts, ask them to share their choices with the rest of their group. Ask students to explain why they relate to this poet’s voice by giving examples from the text of the poems.
• When a student is presenting, those listening should be thinking of constructive comments and questions.
• Listeners should present their comments and questions to presenters, and presenters should incorporate helpful ideas in their explanations.
• Each member of a group should have a chance to present their explanation and receive comments and questions

Make sure your students save notes from this activity, since they will use them when they write letters.

Vocabulary

Ask your students to keep a running list on the front board in the room of the words in the poems they do not understand. These may include:

Forenoon
Distinct
Swarms
Tenderly
Harness
Downy
Conceal
Splendor
Thieving
Glazed
Casual
Chipware
Flatware
Creaking
Twinges
Fringes

Objectives

Students will:

• stating why the poem spoke to them
• asking questions about the poem and how it was written
• with an opening, body and conclusion
• using proper conventions

• Write a letter to a poet whose voice speaks to them

Pre-Activities

Whole class warm-up:

Get students up on their feet and stand in a circle. Do the following whip-arounds one after the other. Start each cycle with the following prompts:

• Right now I feel… (using only a hand gesture)
• Right now I feel… (using only their voice with no words)
• Right now I feel… (using their gesture, voice and descriptive words)

Repeat the cycles using as many of the following prompts as you can: “I see…,” “I hear…,” “I dream…,” “I imagine….”

Students sit down at their desks to write how they are feeling (or what they see, hear, dream or imagine) at this moment using only descriptive words. They should try to capture—in words only—some of what happened when they moved and verbalized. (This may be difficult, but they should try. It will get them somewhat closer to what poets have to do with the tools they have—the blank page, their internal voice, rhythm, and words.)

Generating Questions

Ask your students to take out their notes from the lesson where they responded to poets’ voices and discussed their choices. They will use these notes when they write draft letters to these poets.

• Ask students to look at their notes where they explain why this poet “spoke to them.”
• In a new journal entry (or on a piece of paper) ask them to jot down some questions they would like to ask their poet about how they wrote this poem.
• Ask students to turn and talk to a neighbor with the questions they want to ask, to review questions and make suggestions on how to improve them.
• Ask whole class for examples of great questions to ask in their letters—write some of these on the board, and discuss what makes a good question.

Whole class writing activity:

First draft

• Review the format for an informal letter, including date, greeting and closing.
• Review what makes a good letter in their own voice— their opening idea, the body of the letter containing several paragraphs with their ideas and evidence, and their concluding thoughts.
• Using pen/pencil and paper, ask your students to write a draft letter to their chosen poet, telling him/her what in the poem spoke to them, and asking questions relating to how the poet wrote this poem and writes others.
• If they do not finish this draft (or if you prefer) they can continue to write for homework.

Peer Review: Mirroring Activity

When your students have finished writing their first drafts:

• Place your students in heterogeneous groups of three (or in their usual writing groups, if you do peer review regularly).
• Ask students in each group to exchange letters so they each have someone else’s.
• If necessary, remind your students how to give constructive criticism, citing positives first and then specifics on what can be improved.
• Ask one student to read aloud the letter she has to the other members of her group.
• After she reads it, ask her to tell the writer what she thought the letter said and what was confusing about the letter. Is the letter writer’s voice strong and clear? The reader should also make helpful comments about voice, format and conventions.
• The writer should take notes and incorporate helpful comments, especially those where the reader’s interpretation differed from the writer’s intent.
• Continue the process in each group until all three people have had their letters read back to them, and recorded helpful comments.

Second Draft: (can be accomplished either in class, combined in-class and homework, or as homework).

• Ask your students to rewrite their first drafts, paying attention to the comments they received from their peers.
• Students hand in their second drafts to you for questions and comments.

Comet Hyakutake by Arthur Sze
You & I Belong in This Kitchen by Juan Felipe Herrera
Famous by Naomi Shihab Nye
Cherry Blossoms by Toi Derricotte
Fast Speaking Woman [excerpt] by Anne Waldman

Objectives

Students will:

• Read poems from Chancellors of the Academy of American Poets
• Gain a greater understanding what makes a writer’s voice unique
• Synthesize multiple perspectives in order to create a shared understanding

Pre-Activities

Whole Class Warm-up

Remind your students of the warm-ups they did to begin to understand how voice can be expressed only through words.

• Ask them to quick write in their journals (not lifting their pens/pencils off the paper) what makes a writer’s voice unique. What are the “ingredients” to writing a poem with a strong voice? (You might want to refer to the poetry lesson Poems about Poetry.)
• Ask them to turn and talk to a person they have not worked with before to come up with a shared list of “ingredients.”
• Conduct a whole class discussion—What are the similarities between “voice” in a poem and “voice” in a letter? What are the differences, if any?

Collaborative Reading

Hand out packet of five poems written by Chancellors of the Academy (or have them find them on Poets.org).

• Ask your students to read through all the poems quietly in their seats.
• Ask for two volunteers to read each poem out loud to the class.
• Hand out T-chart forms, one for each poem.
• Ask your students, after listening to and reading each poem, to jot down lines that particularly speak to them on the left side, and what they think the poet did (e.g. what “ingredients” of voice the poet used) to make the lines embody a strong voice on the right side.
• They should also jot down what the poem means to them, and give examples that demonstrate their interpretations.

When they are finished writing, ask your students to get back into groups of three. (You can use prior groupings, or start new groups, if this works better.)

• Tell your students that each person in the group is responsible for making sure everyone in their small group gets a chance to speak.
• Ask for a volunteer to remind the class of what it means to give constructive responses to others’ work.
• After the ground rules for the groups have been established, ask students to give their group members examples of lines they think show strong voice, and explain their choices.
• When the decibel level of the discussion has dropped, ask for a volunteer from each group to summarize, for the whole class, their group’s multiple perspectives on the characteristics of a strong written voice.
• Write these characteristics on the board.

Ask your students to get back in their groups for a new discussion. The purpose this time, however, is for them to see if they can come to some sense of a shared meaning for each of their three poems. They are to:

• Select three of the poems on which they want to focus.
• Have a discussion about the meanings of the poems, following the same process where each student shares his/her perspective.
• Try to synthesize shared meanings.
• Select someone to represent the group’s synthesis to the whole class.
• Give examples of how they arrived at their interpretations to the whole class.
• Keep their notes for the next writing activity.

It is important to tell your students that you are not looking for a “right” interpretation of the poems, rather for their reasoned interpretations. The emphasis is their own reasoned explanation with examples—not on finding the “correct meaning.” They will not only have a good discussion about what they think; they will also be able to use this information when they write to the Chancellor of their choice.

Vocabulary

Ask your students to keep a running list on the front board in the room of the words in the poems they do not understand. These may include:

Mingle
Gnarled
Rutting
Poseur
Redacteur
Auteur
Ion
Cavern
Stalactites
Reverberating
Nucleus
Infinite
Elated
Dismayed
Ardor
Hermano
Tongs
Clinging
Lunar
Monastery
Descends
Meditation
Deportations
Speckled
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Objectives

Students will:

• With the student's unique voice
• Evidence that they have read a poem written by the Chancellor
• Questions for the poet about the poem and their voice as a writer
• Proper format and writing conventions

• Write a formal letter to a poet who is a present Chancellor of the Academy of American Poets

Pre-Activities

Whole Class Warm-up:

Remind your students that now they will be writing formal letters to some of the Chancellors of the Academy of American Poets. The following activities are all concerned with writing these letters.

• In their journals (or on a separate piece of paper) have your students write quick associations to the sentence stem: My writing voice is…. (They should write between 3 and 5 associations.)
• Ask them to get writing groups of three students each, with students who are familiar with their writing.
• In their groups, one student should share her completions to the sentence stem.
• Students who are listening should add constructive descriptions of the student’s voice that they think are missing. If nothing is missing, they can simply agree with the student’s assessment.
• Students should go around the group members, sharing their stem completions and commenting until all students in each group have had a chance.

When they are finished, ask each individual student to choose a poem/poet that spoke to them from the five poems they read by Chancellors of the Academy.

Generating Connections and Questions

After your students have chosen the poet to whom they would like to write, ask them to read the poem carefully again, jotting down lines, words and images that jump out at them. What questions do they have for the poet about the poem and how it was written? When they have finished writing lines, words, images and questions, ask for volunteers to share some of these with the whole class. Make a record of some of these on the board at the front of the room. Explain why you chose the ones you did.

Writing a Formal Letter

First Draft

• Review the format for a formal letter including date, internal address, greeting with punctuation, and appropriate closing.
• Ask for a volunteer (or volunteers) to recall what it means to write “in your own voice.”
• Ask for another volunteer to recall the general form of a letter, i.e. opening idea, several paragraphs containing their ideas and evidence, and their concluding thoughts.
• Using pen/pencil and paper, ask your students to write a draft letter to their chosen poet, telling him/her what in the poem spoke to them, and asking questions relating to how the poet wrote this poem and writes others.
• If they do not finish this draft, they can continue to write for homework. Or you may prefer they do all their writing at home.

Peer Review: Mirroring Activity

When your students have finished writing their first drafts:

• Place your students in heterogeneous groups of three (or in their usual writing groups, if you do peer review regularly).
• Ask students in each group to exchange letters so they each have someone else’s.
• If necessary, remind your students how to give constructive criticism, citing positives first and then specifics on what can be improved.
• Ask one student to read aloud the letter she has to the other members of her group.
• After she reads it, ask her to tell the writer what they thought the letter said and what was confusing about the letter. Is the letter writer’s voice strong and clear? The reader should also make helpful comments about voice, format and conventions.
• The writer should take notes and incorporate helpful comments, especially those where the reader’s interpretation differed from the writer’s intent.
• Continue the process in each group until all three people have had their letters read back to them, and recorded helpful comments.

Second Draft: (can be accomplished either in class, combined in-class and homework, or as homework)

• Ask your students to rewrite their first drafts paying attention to the comments they received from their peers.
• Students hand in their second drafts to you for questions and comments.
• Return students’ second drafts so they can polish handwriting a final draft