Dear Jane,
I was reading your poem and it made me feel creative. I was wondering, have you ever seen a fox? I also liked how you described in detail your poem. Also your poem made me feel creative. I was wondering what you meant when you said, “I wish I had thought to put my face to the grass.”? This poem reminded me of someone that was good and they headed in the wrong path. This poem made me think of this because the foxes were there at first but then they disappeared. Thanks for the great poem.
Sincerely,
Edwin
Grade 7
826CHI