Dear Jane Hirshfield,
I really liked your poem. You put a lot of feeling into it. I could actually see what you are saying. I really liked the way you are very detailed. I really liked this line that said: “I wish I had thought to put my face to the grass.” At the same time I was thinking about who said that, was it the person or the fox? This made me think of when I’m at birthdays someone pushes the birthday person into the cake. It’s funny. I love your poem lol! Keep doing more poems.
-Cynthia
Grade 6
826CHI