April 15, 2017
Dear Mr. Herrera,
I liked how your opem, "You Can't Put Muhammed Ali in a Poem," is loose and goes outside the rules. My favorite part was the end when you said "here it comes! & (it's gonna sting like a bee)" because I could feel it. The poem reminds me of church where the reverend says something and the congregation answers back.
Ray
Age 12
826LA