Dear Juan Felipe,
Keep up the good work. I was wondering what is the story behind the poem? What inspired you? Do you like football? A tip for you is have an energetic tone. I like how you put effort. The poem was good but when you read it try to hype up the reader don’t lose their focus. “On the wet field.” This is my favorite part of the poem. It reminds me of soccer. When I’m at a soccer game I like to flow with the moment and think about the things they can do.
Sincerely,
Kairo
Grade 8
826CHI